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Victor Echeverri's avatar

Nice line “Not when the air still clings to your teeth like words you swallowed.”

Sade's avatar

I love this!!!

Gianna R. - poetry's avatar

I found you from a comment, and I just really adore your writing! You use just enough figurative elements that the story can be told with the emotion and art that poetry brings, but it doesn't hinder your storytelling — it amplifies it.

Nat's avatar

Thank you :) that’s so sweet